Treatment Feedback

We had to present our Treatment presentations to the class and we received a mixture of feedback. A lot of the class thought the idea of a narrative running through the video was a good idea. However a lot of questions were asked as to whether there would be enough 'performance' involved in the video, meeting the band 4 requirements of performing correct and professional lip syncing. This was something myself and Claudia had to consider and think about changing within our ideas. Because nothing was really finalised or planned out yet, it wasn't a major issue because we knew things needed to be planned out more precise and it was a good time for this feedback so we could add it in when making our shot list and storyboard. Our teacher mentioned that we was very realistic about our ideas and locations - because we have picked places close to us and places we can go back to if need be, it will be convenient for us if we later on found footage that didn't work how we wanted to or if we missed something out etc...